Hikari, Xenneth "Marie"

[Xenneth "Marie" Hikari]

[classy=apptitle] HIKARI, XENNETH “MARIE” [/classy][classy=appbord][/classy][classy=appbg][classy=appalias]”Nightingale” [/classy]

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[classy=appimg][/classy][classy=appfield] AGE :: [/classy]
Seventeen;; February 12th

[classy=appfield] GENDER :: [/classy]
MALE

[classy=appfield] SEXUALITY :: [/classy]
Heterosexual

[classy=appfield] NATIONALITY :: [/classy]
Japanese/European

[classy=appfield] FACTION :: [/classy]
Hitman

[classy=appfield] OCCUPATION :: [/classy]
Flower Shop Worker :: Tokyo Bloom

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[classy=appfield] PERSONALITY :: [/classy]

++SWEET;;
o. Realistic – Xenneth is very sour when it comes to reality, mostly putting a spin on things applying statistics.
o. Kind – Even though it seems like Xenneth’s emotions are dull, he is very kind-hearted in nature.
o. Smart – Xenneth is a smart-kid, but usually has very few chances to prove himself.
o. Caring – Xenneth seems to care about things in his life, including family. He has trouble expressing it.
o. Sympathetic – He can be very sympathetic and merciful because of his gentle nature.

--BITTER;;

x. Lack of Social Skills – Xenneth is thought to be diagnosed with negative psychosis, making him not good with talking to people. He’s kind of like a ghost.
x. Reserved – Not very outgoing. Very tranquil and slow moving.
x. Lack of confidence – Xenneth doesn’t have very high confidence when it comes to doing things. Very low self-esteem.
x. Negative Perspective – He doesn’t have a very good spin on reality, mostly giving a bad view on living in general.
x. Non-violent – He is not very violent, nor does not like to engage in fights. However, it doesn’t mean he won’t.

[classy=appfield] LOVIN’ :: [/classy]

[classy=appfield] HATIN’ :: [/classy]

[classy=appfield] MISC INFO :: [/classy]
» Has a younger sister (Rosetta) and Auntie (Chezza) who work the Flower Shop "Tokyo Bloom" with him.
» Has Social Anxiety, making it difficult for him to interact with the world outside his home (The Flower Shop)
» Oddly enough, he has a nightlife that consists of Mafia Members not treading on his territory (Uses the light of his Lantern to guide them away).
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[classy=appfield] FACE CLAIM :: [/classy]
★ [b]happiness![/b], [i]jun watarase[/i] – xenneth “marie” hikari
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[classy=appfield] AGE :: [/classy]
22

[classy=appfield] EXPERIENCE :: [/classy]
10 Years

[classy=appfield] DISCOVERY :: [/classy]
Google

[classy=appfield] OTHER CHARACTERS :: [/classy]
::None::

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[classy=appcr] TEMPLATE BY AUXILLE FOR ONS [/classy]

[Xenneth "Marie" Hikari]

[classy=apptitle] INVENTORY CHECK [/classy][classy=appbord][/classy][classy=appbg][classy=appalias]NIGHTINGALE[/classy]

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[classy=appfield] AFFILIATION :: [/classy]
N/A

[classy=appfield]ALIGNMENT ::[/classy]
Chaotic Good

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[classy=appfield] FLAME ATTRIBUTE & ABILITIES :: [/classy]
>Mist Flame

> NEBBIA FARO (Mist Beacon) – Support-Type Illusion
>> Duration:: 2-Posts {Minimum} -> 4-Posts {Maximum} || Cool Down :: 3-Posts
>> Description:: Nebbia Faro is a basic ability that utilizes the light given off by the Mist-Flame, making it a visual illusion. Xenneth often is able to fool the user from right away just by revealing this flame to them, and just in an instant, they are trapped in his illusion. He often pretends to use this flame offensively, but in fact, the perception of the user is distorted as they are often being victimized by the genjutsu and not the flame itself. The charade of him using offensive Mist Flames often comes from using conjuring balls of Mist Flames from his palms and volleying them: all of them a charade caused by the visual effect of being exposed to his Flames.

The most potent illusion used by Xenneth is the deception that he can effectively use Mist Flames to burn the user when it is actually the light of the flame itself causing the user to be deceived as the Mist Flame distorts pigment in order to show physical illusions. The most obvious weakness of the flame is that those who have their eye sight protected cannot be affected: this includes wearing eye protection that protects against UV Rays. For Xenneth, who wears contact lenses, this seems not to be a problem since they have a special tint to protect his eyes while not having his eyesight impaired or hindered.

[classy=appfield] BOX WEAPON :: [/classy]
> NEBBIA LANTERNA (Mist Lantern) – Support-Type Illusion
>> Description:: Every illusionist needs their medium, and for Xenneth, it is the Nebbia Lanterna. A special Lantern that is able to hold Dying Will Flames, the Nebbia Lanterna serves as a special sort of item that holds Xenneth’s Mist Flames. It’s because of Xenneth’s effects to manipulate the light of his flames to conjure his illusions, then the Nebbia Lanterna increases his flame potency by three times its usual limit. (Making it so the minimum limit of his flame’s illusion lasts six posts, and the maximum being twelve.) Nebbia Lanterna is reinforced and made from special metal that houses the flame making it durable and strong to house the hottest flames and to use as a blunt object for physical assaults.

Nebbia Lanterna increases not only duration and strength, but the perception of Xenneth’s illusions. An example being that his conjuring of his flame manipulation goes from something as simple as small spheres of burning Mist Flames to large pillars of explosive conjuring of flames that would make the user have the perception that they are being insulted by an inferno. This makes a big difference as his flame’s illusion class increases by leaps and bounds making his illusions seem almost too real, especially the illusion that his flames can do damage. The Lantern’s light is enough to light a larger area, thus make it easier for those to fall under the illusions of the Mist-User by being exposed to the glow of the flame or even light the area with a false environment.

[classy=appfield] BOX ANIMAL :: [/classy]
> NEBBIA LUCCIOLE (Mist Fireflies) – Support-Type Illusion
>> Duration:: 10-Posts || Cooldown:: 8-Posts
>> Description:: Nebbia Lucciole of course uses Xenneth’s most prominent of insects to aid him in battle, fireflies. Simple little creatures, these insects are regular sized fireflies, their bodies very small, it’s only usually the only thing seen is the small indigo glow of the mist-flames. These fireflies travel individually or in a group for a grand total of twenty. Using Xenneth’s flames, they carry his ability to project illusions based on light. These illusions usually range from projecting an appearance of a certain item, object. However, the more these fireflies bundle up, the more larger than illusions (Range from being a small basketball to a false environment the size of an average living room).

This usually is an ability that projects Xenneth’s field of illusions or even his own image to help assist or deceive on the battlefield. These fireflies can make the difference between a good distraction and a flaw failure depending on the distribution of the fireflies amongst the designated area in which they are distributed in, their placement, and how the light illuminates the area.

[classy=appfield] EQUIPMENT :: [/classy]
> Desperation UV Lenses
>> Effect:: A basic tool to help Xenneth see. However, it’s also modified so he can be resistant to his Mist Flame’s strength when he uses more powerful illusions. Basically, they help him keep control.[/classy]

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[classy=appfield] MISCELLANEOUS ITEMS :: [/classy]
Flower Pendant: A pendant shaped as a Rose Blossom’s top. It contains a picture of Xenneth and his little sister, Rosetta.
Melody Book: A special journal filled with musical compositions and songs that Xenneth wrote or recorded after hearing them. His singing and his ability to use the Mist-Flame Lantern earned him the title, “Nightingale.” (That and the gender confusion that is common among the Nightingale bird-species that sing thought to be female. >_>)[/classy]
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[classy=appcr] TEMPLATE BY AUXILLE FOR ONS [/classy]

[Il Chameleon]

[classy=threadbg][classy=maintitle] DANGER WILL ROBINSON [/classy][classy=border][/classy][classy=textwall]

I spotted a few (for lack of a better word) nono's with your app. The first of which is that your box weapon cannot be ignited by other flames. Converting between flames isn't something that mist flames can do. So just take that little part out and we're square.

Next thing, I'm confused as to what your box animal does. If you could clarify what the field of illusions does that would be great.

Lastly, you listed two items under equipment and although they serve the same purpose, for the sake of your character inventory tab you will need to choose just one. Thanks.


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[Il Chameleon]

[classy=threadbg][classy=maintitle] 'R' YOU READY TO PARTY [/classy][classy=border][/classy][classy=textwall]

Welcome a'board.' You corrected my problems and your charrie is A-OK in my book. Xenneth is approved but other admins will take a look later on in case they have beef, but that's just procedure. Welcome to the party.


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